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This is my erasure poetry. I have taken page 18 from the book Great Expectations. I then chose the words to make a poem/story and then "erased" the rest of the words. If you cannot read the picture, it says," If you can recommend your time for a little while perhaps you'll mention my sister, you looked at her solemnly as if you moved, then when i was your age i bolted.
A7 An effective use of the erasure method to create a quite profound poem. It doesn't quite get a higher mark as it doesn't make full grammatical sense - eg 'as if you moved', when perhaps you mean 'as if you were moved' and the use of 'then', which doesn't quite fit either.
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