Thursday, 13 March 2014

Form, Purpose, Audiance nom. 2

Form
ransom from kidnap

Purpose
enlighten

Audience
GP's

Topic/Influence
why do people wear kilt



DR. DOLITTLE 

I HAVE YOUR PRESCRIPTION PAD, SO LET ME ENLIGHTEN YOU.
I LIKE WEARING KILTS BECAUSE IT LETS ME FEEL FREE, UNLIKE TROUSERS. THAT LOVLY ITCHY WOOL MATERIAL AGAINST MY BUT MAKES ME FEEL SO WONDERFUL AND SCOTTISH, LIKE MY ANCESTORS ARE WALKING FREE AS A KILT BESIDES ME. 


WEAR A KILT TOMORROW AND I WILL GIVE BACK YOUR PRESCRIPTION PAD. OR ELSE.


MR SMITH
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2 comments:

  1. Unknown13 March 2014 at 06:14

    C 7- The formatting of the work is good, and you consistently use a register and style that serves the context and the intention. Some spelling errors, however that could be done on purpose to serve the intention of a Ransom note.

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  2. Jo Wayman18 March 2014 at 04:58

    Agree fully with Calvin's comments - C7 overall - you have cleverly adapted your language to suit the form.

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